For Someone Special – by LadyoftheMasque

Link: http://snapeyluvshermy.livejournal.com/269240.html?thread=1517240#t1517240 (Instructions for joining author’s Yahoo group that has the files, requires signing up for a Yahoo account)
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https://sshgreview.files.wordpress.com/2017/03/ladyofthemasque-for-someone-special-part-1.pdf
https://sshgreview.files.wordpress.com/2017/03/ladyofthemasque-for-someone-special-part-2.pdf
Note that the final two links are in two parts, you will need to read both, of course! I’m only hosting because the Internet ate the Restricted Section and it’s sad for a classic beautiful fic to disappear from the Internet for that reason; I’ll remove my files once it is back up properly again. Hopefully that is okay!

Rating: Outstanding Minus

The Basics: Phoenix Era (inspired by OoTP era, with additions from later books) Drama/Angst/Romance, 550k,

Warnings: Underage, Non-Con, Extremely Kinky in Every Way, Slash, Violence, Suicide, NC-17 Everything.

In the direst of circumstances, with no other options, Professor Snape performs the ancient Veritamoria ritual with Hermione Granger, binding her mind to his and saving her life.

First off, this fic is 500k and I first read it more than 10 years ago.  I loved this fic so much that I used “Veritamoria” as my password for years.  I scrawled the words in the margins of my college notes, with hearts and Snapes.  I fangirl this fic.

My favorite part of this story is the ancient love ritual potion, Veritamoria.  Essentially, it is a love-enhancing potion that works over a period of months, strengthening the bond between two individuals by giving them a telepathic link that increases slowly in power as the lovers progress through the stages –  Mind-Bound, Heart-Bound, Soul-Bound.   Most couples have incompatible thoughts and never make it through the first stage.

Veritamoria is a genius idea for this pairing; you can imagine how much fun the author has with the telepathic communication between Snape and Hermione.If you have read many reviews on my site, you will note that I often look for ‘witty banter’ as part of my criteria for a good SSHG fanfic.  They are both intelligent and snarky (“I see no difference,” and “emotional range of a teaspoon,” for example), and they should rile each other up with hilarious biting comments, in my opinion.  “For Someone Special” is what GAVE me that opinion.  So much fabulous, unrestrained, occasionally telepathic, stream-of-consciousness snarky verbiage is spilled.

The writing and characterizations are perfect. They define the genre, for me.  Snape, in this fic, has an incredibly strong tumultuous undercurrent of emotions that he keeps firmly repressed. That is so canon – Lily – yet this was written during OotP era. This is absolutely how I see Snape. So few authors get this right. He often does and says the opposite of what he feels; at first it was self-protective, then it was necessary (to pretend he was a loyal Death Eater.) then it became an unconscious misery-reinforced habit. The Veritamoria link with Hermione slowly strips away those protective barriers, both conscious and unconscious.  Beautiful.

There are a few problems, of course.  The author seems to have difficulty writing relational conflict. There are a series of ‘tragic misunderstandings’ in the final section of the fic that are utterly frustrating.  I understand that tension is needed for a satisfying resolution, but the way it unfolds is ham-fisted. One of the misunderstandings could have been easily avoided with a simple conversation; something horrible had to happen, yes, but it would have been through tearful agreement rather than a stupid misunderstanding. Then, just when that obstacle is wrapping up, ANOTHER stupid misunderstanding, even more frustrating than the first, occurs, through deux-ex-machina Dumbledore meddling.  It’s obvious to the reader that both misunderstandings were going to be resolved, so reading through them was absolutely drudgery.  Both misunderstandings could have created tension enjoyably and satisfactorily if they were handled with more maturity from both characters, and had been briefer.

Additionally, I must complain that there is way, way, way too much sex in this fic for my taste, and that Snape and Hermione are far more focused on sex than they should be.  Yet, because of this clever Eromancy plot, and Mudslut Voldemort Performance Spy plot, it’s tied to the plot and doesn’t feel like filler.  I should also add that the sex is very kinky.  This is one of the earliest fics that I read, when I was very young, and I must say that it shocked the hell out of me.  It’s all done tastefully, but there is pretty much every kind of sex you can think of, magically altered in EVERY way.  It’s an exploratory Tantric Eromancy project, after all.

If you’d like a LadyoftheMasque story that is slightly less sex-focused, you could try In Annulo by the same author. (Clarification: less sex, but still way too much.)

The bottom line: An almost perfect fic.  There is way too much sex, and a series of extremely annoying tragic misunderstandings at the end, but there is also a beautiful, well-written, highly imaginative love story. The QUALITY of the writing is unbelievable.  Read it just for glorious Veritamoria, the best plot device in all of SSHG, widely beloved and used by other authors – all inspired by this fic.  Skim through the parts that you don’t like, because the overall quality of this fic is WELL worth it.

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14 thoughts on “For Someone Special – by LadyoftheMasque

  1. Pingback: In Annulo – by LadyoftheMasque | sshgreview

  2. it was one of my favorites when I first started reading fanfiction! Thank you for reviewing, you clarify what I couldn’t quite put to words 🙂

  3. ohhhh I don’t think I will ever forget this one. I read it way back when I was honestly much too young for it, and it’s been popping up in my head at inconvenient moments ever since.

    Speaking of LoTM – I don’t suppose you have a copy of An Army of Snapes hanging about anywhere? I’ve been looking for it for quite a while – I read it at around the same time as For Someone Special but never saved a copy, so…

    • Yes, I love this one! On re-read the plot was a total mess and there was 1000x too much smut, but the writing and banter is so excellent that it hardly matters.

      I do not, I’m sorry about that! I’m hoping Ashwinder will be back online soon; the webmistress is working on it and they have had problems before. I believe it took her 3-4 months to get the site back online last time.

      • Yes, I’ve noticed that you don’t like too much smut. This is not a problem I’ve ever had, although in some cases (Teaching Miss Granger and, in fact, For Someone Special) I have had to take a break for some calming tea and possibly a less-erotic fic in-between chapters.

        I do notice that as I mature I seem to be looking for less smut and more tension, however – like the one where Snape comes over all wobbly about Hermione’s neck, which really struck me. I’ve also started liking the ones like Camarado and Pet Project, where they start becoming close in HBP and the relationship is on a slow-burn from there.

      • Yes! I just finished reading this! I think the last half was the best when everything started coming together finally. But then the misunderstanding/time apart dragged on. And when I first read your review, I wondered how on Earth there could be too much smut. And then I read it and thought, oh. That’s how. Lol. looking back I was kind of shocked out how much and how varied their sex was in so few months! I know it had a basis in the plot, but damn! I did like the story though. Probably not in my top fave fics since I was so late to read this, but I do love the idea of the soul bond. It was such a simpler time before horcruxes were involved!

      • Thank you so much for your comments on this story! I read this fic SO long ago that I worry my review was irrelevant or over-praised for modern readers. I’m glad to hear that you enjoyed it as a fresh reader in 2017. It definitely has its problems, but the writing is SO.GOOD.

    • I think you’ve just convinced me to pick up ‘Pet Project’ as my next fic. It was unfinished when harmony_bites made her Epic list, so she didn’t include it. I found it on her WIP list when I was trawling though those looking to find some gems that were later finished. I saved a copy, but was reading something else and then forgot about it. Thank you for the reminder!

      • Pet Project is great. I had a tiny bit of trouble getting into it initially, but once I was past the first chapter I really quite enjoyed it. It has some really excellent house elves in it 😀

      • I love pet project. I’ve read it twice in 3 months. When Hermione makes Snape the sheets, I swoon every time.

  4. I’m glad you like it! I found it had the perfect mixture of angst and a really sweet romance, and if I recall correctly there’s quite a lot of ‘oh god he smells so good’ and lingering looks and so on.

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